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2017/4/22 18:41:57

                          My school life
I have been studying in Changjun Boarding middle school for two years.
  When I set foot in the school,I thought my new life started.Our school is so beautiful.There are
many trees and flowers in it.So the air is fresh.Just a breath will make you satisfied.
  As soon as we mention the school life,people will think of a lot of homework which is heaped like a hill.Maybe,yes,in the eyes of most people,the school life is so boring.For example,every day we are woken up by music at 6:45,then have eight classes.After the last class is over at 18:00,is everything finished?No,the self learn class would last four hours from 19:00 to 23:00.We hardly have spare time to do other things we like.So the school life may be busy and boring.It is black and white.It is also a fact we can't change.To be a Chinese student,we have to face the music that to study hard is to make our life happier inthe future.After all,all our efforts aim at getting into a good university.It is worthy of doing so.
  Fortunatelly,we can also find something interesting and precious in the busy and boring life.Kinds of activities are held sometimes.Say,the English corner,which can improve our spoken English.There you will see some foreign teachers and you can talk with them to practise your English.We talk with each other freely.Don't be shame,they are all kind and friendly.What you should do is just talking something you want to talk.
  We also held a soccer game in our grade several months ago.Our class all did our best to fight for our goals.My classmates were active,they did everything they can.They wrote some essays and show bills,even offered the money to buy water for players.And our team trained hard.We were united.Although we didn't play well in the first match(but we were lucky,we won the match because of an own goal),our classmates still encouraged us,they believed us.With the encouragement,we played better and better. Eventually,we became the champion.What made our dream come true?Not our fottball skills.I must say it was because of the friendship.It is the highest of the highest.I'm proud of our team and our class.
  On Saturday,we usually hold a party in the dormitory.Talking with others about E-games、sports and life we eat together,share the snacks.It is the golden time when we enjoy ourselves.From the life of dormitory,I have known many things.Such as how to make friends and what is the unselfish love.I have found something valuable in my life.
  So I think school life is not only black and white but also colourful.However how to find out the beauty in our life is the most important thing we should learn. 
  It reminds me of my maths teacher,who have told us,"If you don't have experienced of the high school life,you won't be a true man."
  I love everything about my school,so I love my school life and I will value it.



“education is not only just about learning new things,new knowledge, it invovles having the ability to ask questions.”for or against, give at least three reasons to support your view.   




2017/4/22 21:22:05

                                  
                      Asking is necessary
No doubt that education is about learning new things,but I think it also involves having the ablility to ask questions.
    In most schools in China,students only learn new knowledge in class.They hardly ask any questions about the coursebooks or the teachers'ideas.From their point of view,teachers are always right,books are always right.They believe what they have learned is absolutely right,although the fact is not like what they imagine.The result is that they don't have their own ideas.Wtat does it mean?It means that they are only memories.What they can do is just copying some previous people's ideas.If you want them to do something they haven't done,they may tell you that they are sorry not to have learned how to do it.Does the society need a person who is just like a memory?No,a computer can do better.Does a company need a person who can only do something they have learned?No,as far as I know some animals can also do that.So a famous person have said,"If you don't doubt the books at all,you might as well have no books."
    Why have many of us been under the illusion that only learning is OK?The reason is that they are unaware of the disadvantages of only learning.Learning new knowledge is the foundation of our success.Of course,it is true but they ignore a more important fact.What is it?It is that learning is to asking is what flowers are to bees.What you have learned can help you do things easily,but it may also put you into a limited scope.Then,the way to solve the problem is doubting and asking.
    The spirit os doubting and asking are the most important things for creativity.It seems that scientists and inventors don't have much in common but the ability of asking "why".For example,Albert Enstein,who was the most famous physics scientist,used to ask kinds of questions which his teachers coudn't answer.This situation,however,made his teachers feel embarrassed and angry.And finally,he was not allow to go to the school any longer.Fortunately,his parents encouraged him to do this.Einstein became more and more creative because of asking "why".Eventually,he succeeded.Imagine that if Einstein didn't have done like that,could we have had the Theory of Relativity? 
    On the other hand,if you ask some questions and get the answers,you will know the knowledge better.When you learn some new knowledge at first,you can not understand it at once.It should be digested gradually.To ask is a kind of way to digest.If I don't understand the knowledge well,I will ask.Because asking can make what I'm not good at easier and find out the disadvantages of my learning method.By asking,I can do better next time.
    So,it can be seen that asking is necessary.If we want to be the host of learning,we should ask.Nobody only want to be a memory,right?And neither asking nor learning can be ignored.




2017/4/22 23:22:19

“education is not only just about learning new things,new knowledge, it invovles having the ability to ask questions.”for or against, give at least three reasons to support your view. 
 
Asking is necessary
No doubt that education is about learning new things,but I think it also involves having the ablility to ask questions.
In most schools in China,students only learn new knowledge in class.They hardly ask any questions about the coursebooks or the teachers'ideas.From their point of view,teachers are always right,books are always right.They believe what they have learned is absolutely right,although the fact is not like what they imagine.The result is that they don't have their own ideas.Wtat does it mean?It means that they are only memories.What they can do is just copying some previous people's ideas.If you want them to do something they haven't done,they may tell you that they are sorry not to have learned how to do it.Does the society need a person who is just like a memory?No,a computer can do better.Does a company need a person who can only do something they have learned?No,as far as I know some animals can also do that.So a famous person have said,"If you don't doubt the books at all,you might as well have no books."


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